Wednesday, May 12, 2021

Fifth Turn Up the Heat Reader's Challenge Excerpt: Loving Laurie

 Welcome back to excepts from entries in the Turn Up the Heat Reader's Challenge, the contest where if you read and rate erotica by May 31, 2021, you can win a prize package of more erotica by the same writers, as well as a $200 gift certificate for sex toys from Sohimi.    

Today's excerpt is from Loving Laurie by Natalie Hothorne.  (Outside the US use this link.)

When Laurie discovers a crate of Joe’s old porn a whole new world opens for her. While viewing the films together, the topic of anal pleasure arises. Laurie confesses she has never done butt stuff. Fascinated by the thought, she contemplates the possibilities, but her initial concerns overshadow her curiosity.

With the guidance of sexpert, Mona; and Joe’s patient attitude, Laurie finally conquers her worries and discovers a completely new level of intense pleasure.

More than an erotic novella, Loving Laurie, is a tale filled with love and extending boundaries.
 
Here's the excerpt:  

We settled in on the couch and I put on some music.  Faith Hill's Breath was playing.

"I love this song." said Laurie.

"Me too. I've always tried to imagine what it would be like to have a woman feel that way about me." I confessed.

"You don't have to imagine any more," She said, leaning in to kiss me.

  I kissed her back and soon we were making out like sex starved teenagers, letting our tongues explore each other. I nipped at her lower lip with my teeth. She sucked my lip into her mouth. My hands were fumbling with  the hem of her sweater looking for a way in.

She reached down and pulled the sweater over her head, then climbed on to my lap, straddling me, she buried her face in the crook of my neck. She smelled of jasmine.

I slid a hand behind her back and freed her from the lacy bra, then leaned back to fully appreciate her bare breasts. My eyes were drawn to her erect nipples, they were caramel colored and as big as gum drops. 

I traced the edge of her large areolas with a finger. Laurie let out a soft moan, as I pulled her close, gently taking a nipple in my mouth and began to suck. I massaged her other breast with my hand. She arched her back, pushing her pelvis against my hardening cock. I was pressing back harder, grinding against her as she began to move her hips more rapidly.

Pausing to catch her breath, Laurie softly asked if I wanted to move to the bedroom. Without a word I wrapped her tightly in my arms, rose to my feet and carried her down the hall.

Once in the bedroom, I sat her on the bed and turned on a bedside lamp.

 "Do you mind the light?" I asked. 

She said that she was a little uncomfortable at the thought of me seeing her nude for the first time.  I reached to turn it off.

 “No leave it on. I want to see what exactly has been rubbing up against me these past couple of weeks.” She gave me a small grin.

I unbuttoned my shirt, she rose from the bed to meet me. Pulling her close, I relished the heat as our bare flesh touched for the first time. I slid her jeans and panties down with a smooth, well practiced motion. Then stepped back as she freed her pants from around her ankles. I studied her body with hungry eyes and looked her in the face.

“You are beautiful.” She  flushed and softly murmured, “Thank you.”

Kneeling before me, she undid my jeans. I wasn't wearing underwear. She saw that I was clean shaven, and  murmured her approval.  Having freed my hard cock, she leaned in to take it in her mouth.

I had been fantasizing about this exact moment, since the day we had met.  Thinking of how those plump, moist lips would feel on my cock.  In that moment however, my urge to taste, was stronger then the need to be tasted

I stopped her and said “Not yet”.

Helping her to her feet, I softly pushed her onto the bed and fell upon her. Kissing her mouth, I let my fingers explore her already soaked pussy. With a fingertip, I gently traced her wet lips from the opening up to her clit and back down again.

Laurie's soft moans increased in volume everytime I brushed against her rapidly swelling clit.

I never lingered in one spot for long, sensing when my touch had her near the brink I would change direction, edging her.

It didn't take long to figure out what she liked, she was very vocal. I deliberately teased her, delaying the release she was looking for again and again.

  She began to grind against my hand, eager to cum. I knew she was edging closer. I slowed my hand and gently cupped her pussy while kissing her neck.

I gently began to bite her neck. She let out a soft moan and she ground against my hand.

. "I want to taste you," I whispered in her ear. "Would you like that?"

"Yes," she gasped.  "Oh, yes...please"

 Slowly I kissed and sucked my way to her breast. Lingering just long enough to suck each nipple, while continuing to gently massage her pussy. I felt her breath catch as I kissed her stomach and worked my tongue to just above her clit. Reaching up to grab a pillow, I told her to raise her ass so I could slide it beneath her. With her pelvis elevated I spread her legs and began kissing her inner thighs.

I realized how desperate she must be to cum when she tried to guide my mouth to her clit. I resisted, knowing what she wanted  but having no desire for the moment to end. I was enjoying the sweet taste of her juices.

"I can't take it anymore." she finally begged "Please let me cum"

Ignoring her pleas, I slid my tongue down from her clit and gently licked her asshole. This caught off guard and she flinched.  Then she moaned, letting me know she liked it. I continued running my tongue over her firm pucker massaging her hard clit with a thumb.

Ready to give her what she wanted, I moved back up to her inner lips and nibbled on the soft pink flesh. Slowly pushing  two fingers into her wet pussy. I found her G spot. Her hips reacted violently.  She began a rapid, rhythmic rocking as I stroked her inner wall. I placed my free hand on her belly and pulled her clit hood back, now giving my mouth full access.

Slowly I licked the hard nub.  Feeling her body tense and her pussy walls contract around my hand, I sucked her clit tightly into my mouth and softly bit down. Her body went rigid and then convulsed violently. She ground her pubic bone  viciously against my mouth. When she came, it was with an explosive force.

She was a screamer. “FUCK, FUCK, FUCK!"poured from her mouth, as her juices flowed from her pussy.  She continued to pound against my mouth.

As her orgasm subsided, trying to catch her breath, Laurie put a hand on my head, signaling me to stop. I released her clit from my mouth, but continued to move my fingers in her pussy. She convulsed again. I  pushed my fingers in deeper and began to thrust them rapidly in and out. The orgasm was not as strong as the first but it seemed to go on forever. When it was over my face was drenched in her sweet juices.

Laurie painted, “Damn! That was amazing”

I slid up to kiss her on the mouth, she wiped my face before returning the kiss.

“Oh my God, my pussy is still twitching” she said as she reached down to touch my cock.

 “That's a good thing, right?” I asked , as she began to stroke my dick.

 “Very good! Now lay back and let me return the favor

I felt her tongue slide over my shaft. moving upward from my balls to the tip. I breathed heavily as she slowly flicked her tongue across my head. I  stroked her hair to show how much I liked it. She ran her tongue around the rim of my head, focusing on the sensitive underside. She had found my happy spot and sucked the entire head into her mouth continuing to work her tongue.

 I began to slowly move my hips as she took me deep in her mouth.  She cupped my balls as she varied her pace up and down my shaft. Occasionally she would stroke me with her hand. She continued to tease me, being careful to not take it too far.

 I was loving what she was doing, but wanted to be inside her. Not wanting to cum yet I tapped her on the shoulder and suggested she take a break. She made a whine of disappointment, but slid up next to me. We embraced and kissed long and gently.

Laurie positioned herself so that she was straddling me and we continued to kiss. Her breasts gently grazed my chest, as they gently swayed above me. We could both feel my cock growing harder beneath her twitching pussy, neither of us could wait any longer. She reached down to position my penis right at her soaked opening and gently lowered her hips. She let out a gasp as her waiting pussy sucked me in. We began to gently move together and I felt an electric jolt shoot through my whole body. I knew from the look in her eyes,I was not the only one to feel it.

It was like our intimate parts had been engineered to fit perfectly together. We merged to form a finely tuned machine, whose only purpose was to give maximum pleasure to both of us.

My senses had never felt so alive. I could smell the mix of her perfume mingling with the musk of our love making. I could hear every breath she took, It was as if I felt every ridge of my fingers moving over her breasts. The saltiness of her flesh was strong on my lips. An intense awareness spread through my body.

Her growing moans let me know, Laurie was experiencing something very similar. We increased the pace of our thrusting, My cock was getting harder with each thrust. I could feel the tight muscles of her pussy clenching with each thrust as she bore down, taking me ever deeper inside her.

Laurie leaned back and the light shone on her long hair,tossing from side to side. She had a crazed, desperate look about her as she pursued her orgasm with total abandonment.  I grasped her ass and drove myself deeper into her, thrusting as hard as I could, seeking my own orgasm

I told her I was about to cum and she yelled, “God Yes! Cum for me baby." As I shot a massive load, she released an orgasm that must have been building within her for the past five minutes. Her juices flowed freely and I felt the wetness spread across my loin. “OH MY! GOD!,” she cried as I felt her pussy continue to spasm. 

Laurie held her place astride me, sweat pouring from our bodies, panting. My cock was still hard and she showed no desire to release it any sooner than she had to.

"I’ve never cum so hard in my life." she said, still short of breath.

Eventually I began to soften and she rolled off, laying her head on my chest.

We cuddled like that for a while, neither of us speaking. 

Just as I was about to doze off, Laurie broke the silence.

"I really like you," she said. "I mean I really like you...a lot"

         "I love you, too." I said and kissed the tip of her nose.

 

 



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